War World: The Battle of Sauron
by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne

Archival Holdings:

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

533 leaves

Carr-03-03

Physical Description:

Written across title page in blue marker is “First Draft – Battle of Sauron 06/06/07 JFC.” This first draft is not titled War World: the Battle of Sauron, but is titled “Sauron Armageddon.”  There are no edits to this draft.  The entire draft feature some damage to the paper, possibly do to smoke around all four edges of each page. 

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

562 leaves

Carr-03-04

Physical Description:

Edited draft for the novel War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne.  Edited by Donald Hawthorne, his corrections appear in red ink and marker on the text.  The title page features an editor’s mark at the bottom of the page correcting “&” with “and” in red ink.

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

446 leaves

Carr-03-05

Physical Description:

Edited draft for the novel War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne.  Victoria Alexander copyedited this draft on 06/06/2006, while the editor’s marks appear in red ink.  Post-it flags mark the pages where the editor has made corrections to the text, although not all corrections are marked with the post-it flags.  On the backside of page 321 there is a pink post-it note a to-do list written on it.  The dates of when these pages were printed are from 06/05/2006 and 06/07/2006.  The file names for these pages are labeled as “Battle of Sauron INT 1P.indd.”  Written across the title page on this draft in pen and which has been circled is “Reference Copy.”

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

446 leaves

Carr-03-06

Physical Description:

Edited draft for the novel War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne.  Editor of the draft is unknown, while the editor’s marks appear in red ink.  Post-it flags mark the pages where the editor has made corrections to the text.  On page 205 the color of the paper is blue, while the rest of the draft is white.  The dates of when these pages were printed are from 11/30/06 and 12/01/06.  The file names for these pages are labeled as “Battle of Sauron INT 2P.indd.”  The cover page for this draft has “Next to final” written in pen on the top right corner, followed by John F. Carr’s initials.

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

446 leaves

Carr-04-01

Physical Description:

Edited draft for the novel War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne.  Editor of the draft is unknown, while the editor’s marks appear in red ink or have been retyped and taped onto the pages.  Post-it flags mark the pages where the editor has made corrections to the text, although not all corrections are marked with the post-it flags.  The dates of when these pages were printed are from 11/30/06 and 12/01/06.  The file names for these pages are labeled as “Battle of Sauron INT 2P.indd.”  The cover page has “Note: Please change ornament (------) style.” written in red pen across the top presumably by the editor.

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-04-02

Physical Description:

In this folder are two copies of an editor’s correction list for the novel.  One copy is complete while the second copy is missing several pages.  Both copies however are of the same correction list.

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

78 leaves

Carr-04-03

Physical Description:

Edited draft in an unusual pagination for the novel War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne.  The color of all the pages is blue, except for one page that is white.  Editor of the draft is unknown, while the editor’s marks appear in red ink.  The dates of when these pages were printed are from 11/30/06 and 12/01/06.  The file names for these pages are labeled as “Battle of Sauron INT 2P.indd.”

War World: the Battle of Sauron [typescript]

117 leaves

Carr-04-04

Physical Description:

Incomplete edited draft for the novel War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Donald Hawthorne.  Editor of the draft is unknown, while the editor’s marks appear in red ink.  Post-it flags mark the pages where the editor has made corrections to the text.

War World: the Battle of Sauron [envelope + typescript + floppy disc]

24 leaves & 1 floppy disc

Carr-04-05

Physical Description:

The envelope is from Don Hawthorne and sent to John F. Carr.  Written in blue marker across the envelope says “Battle of Sauron – 1994 (org. filer and outline.)  There is one draft of an overview for a novel titled “Cyborg Revolt” and one prologue draft.  The floppy disc is labeled “Ven. 4 RVLT.”

War World: The Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-05-17

8 leaves

Physical Description:

This is an eight page list of proposals / corrections made by Jonathon King for John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne’s War World: The Battle of Sauron

War World: The Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-05-18

Physical Description:

This file contains three sections: email from Mark Graves from Ad Astra Games, his list of proposals / corrections for War World: The Battle of Sauron, and notes on distances between worlds in the War World universe.

War World: The Battle of Sauron [hardcover]

Carr-05-19

Physical Description:

This is a hardcover edition of War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne.  This is a first edition copy, printed by Pequod Press in 2007.

This title is filed with other hardcover copies of works by John F. Carr.

War World: The Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-05-20

Physical Description:

This is a draft of War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne.  Written on the cover of the draft in pen is “Final Corrected Gallery.  With corrections added.  Returned to Desktop Miracles on 7/16/07. JFC.”

War World: The Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-05-21

Physical Description:

This is a copy-edited draft of War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne.  Written in ink on the title page is “1^st Version – Copy Edited by Don Hawthorne.”  Corrections in the text appear in black and red ink.  This draft was printed on June 6^th, 2006.

War World: The Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-05-22

Physical Description:

This is a copy-edited draft of War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne.  Written in ink on the title page is “1^st Version – received 6/2006 – 1 copy to Victoria Alexander – 1 copy to Don Hawthorne – 1 copy to J.F.C.”  And on the bottom of the title page is “Copy Edited by J.F.C.”  Edits to this draft appear in red ink, and are marked with red post-it flags.  The draft was printed on June 6^th, 2006.

Coming of the Eye: A War World Novel [typescript]

Carr-06-07

175 leaves

Physical Description:

A group of three printouts, each titled Coming of the Eye: A War World Novel, the original title of War World: the Battle of Sauron, by John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne. The first printout, 61 pages, is signed by John F. Carr and labeled “Original Battle of Sauron draft, approx. 1996.” This printout includes the prologue and chapters 1-6 of the novel. The second printout, 90 pages, includes the prologue and chapters 1-9 of the novel. The third printout, 24 pages, includes the prologue and chapter 1 with chapter 1 formatted into 2 subsections.

Coming of the Eye: A War World novel excerpt [typescript]

24 pages

Carr-08-19

Physical Description:

A portion of John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne’s novel, War World: The Battle of Sauron, bearing its original title, discovered with the Rainbow Run excerpts in Carr-08-09. The excerpt includes the prologue and chapter 1 of the novel. No editing or other marks are present on the document.

War World: The Battle of Sauron [typescript]

Carr-09-01

Physical Description:

This is a copy-edited draft of War World: The Battle of Sauron by John F. Carr and Don Hawthorne.  Written in ink on the title page is “Final Ms – Copy edited by Victoria Alexander.”  Edits to this draft appear in red ink, and are marked with blue post-it notes and post-it flags.

War World Correspondence [Miscellaneous]

Carr-15-01

Physical Description:

A collection of miscellaneous correspondence dealing with the War World novels. The material includes emails and letters between Carr, Jerry Pournelle, other contributing War World authors, and other individuals over a wide range of dates.

Battle of Sauron Illustrations [Printed images]

Carr-15-09

Physical Description:

The cover art for War World: The Battle of Sauron. This file also includes a diagram of the titular battle, and map’s of Landyn’s Star System, where the anthology takes place.

Sauron [Typescript]

9 pages

Carr-15-26

Physical Description:

A document titled “Sauron.” The document contains notes on the planet Sauron, and it bears some black editing marks.

War World: The Battle of Sauron McElwain Comments [typescript]

Carr-22-21

Physical Description:

An email from Doug McElwain to John Carr with his comments, edits, questions and problems regarding War World: The Battle of Sauron.

War World: The Battle of Sauron Contract [typescript]

Carr-22-22

Physical Description:

Contract with Desktop Miracles company for War World: The Battle of Sauron.

War World: The Battle of Sauron Edited Version [typescript]

Carr-22-23

Physical Description:

Starting with Chapter Thirty Two this is an edited version of War World: The Battle of Sauron.

War World: The Battle of Sauron Revised and trimmed Second Edition [typescript]

Carr-22-24

Physical Description:

This is a revised and trimmed second edition of War World: The Battle of Sauron that has various edits with some pages missing.

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